We have been learning to create a story web
Uncle Jeff and the Switching Disaster
by Cliodhna Lavery
Set in a island
Characters: Jeff, jessica,ben,Grainne
I in the beginning ben and his wife got 4 tickets to mexico they invited jeff and jessica when all of a sudden the plane crashes on a island.
Middle:
In the middle jessica finds a bottle in the sand with a note in it. The note said that there is a big stone on the island. You go to it and say can I have a map.The stone will reply with a riddle.when you answer the riddle you will get a map and a key. you find a door and open the door with the key and you will find food.
End:
In the end they build A raft and found another plane and and when they woke up they found themselves in mexico.
Evaluation:
This was a very good story I recommend you read this story in your free time if you can.
by Cliodhna Lavery
Set in a island
Characters: Jeff, jessica,ben,Grainne
I in the beginning ben and his wife got 4 tickets to mexico they invited jeff and jessica when all of a sudden the plane crashes on a island.
Middle:
In the middle jessica finds a bottle in the sand with a note in it. The note said that there is a big stone on the island. You go to it and say can I have a map.The stone will reply with a riddle.when you answer the riddle you will get a map and a key. you find a door and open the door with the key and you will find food.
End:
In the end they build A raft and found another plane and and when they woke up they found themselves in mexico.
Evaluation:
This was a very good story I recommend you read this story in your free time if you can.
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